Yours To Keep

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Yours To Keep

I woke up to see
The light of day
Then I found myself
Floating away
Into the sky
Through days gone by
When I was free
And in control.
That was me
Buried in that hole
Six feet of dirt
But still it hurts.
Not a single grain
Of this sand
Will stop the pain
Of a dying man.
I closed my eyes
And fell asleep
The blood I shed
Is yours to keep.

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KtIrish commented on Yours To Keep

11-15-2009

This is definitley one I have to think about. But I love it. Great write.

reyjamiei

11/19/2009

Thank you KtIrish...

BabyGurl91 commented on Yours To Keep

11-15-2009

This is a very deep poem. I loved it all the way through.

jademelissa74 commented on Yours To Keep

11-14-2009

The pain and realization of a chapter lost is very vividly conveyed. The anguish is felt throughout the entire poem. Great job!

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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