All Out

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    All Out

     Surrounded by intense and smothering darkness/
    My art is tense and muttered as I spark this/
    lyrical flint...Thoughts bent/
    went back to times departed and spent/
    Vent keeps blowing 98 degree air/
    just enough to prepare me for sight clarity/
    These words are charity for the needy/
    they carry me thru deals thats seedy/
    with motherfuckers vile and wild and greedy/
    Stabbed in the back and still bleeding/
    the same old song keeps repeating on and on/
    Exceeding expectations righting wrongs/
    Proceeding to hit the bong/
    if it passes my way/
    I'm a lover by night and an ill motherfucker by day/
    Spray/
    ideas out randomly and shape the lines like clay/
    Shave away the outer layers and find the center/
    Enter domes with ease tease out the truth/
    mix it like juice with vodka and ice in the blender/
    Liberty defender, able and willing contender/
    2 cent lender; instigation of information WAR/
    Can't afford to be silent a moment more/
    Implore kindred to get intense in their core/
    and pour knowledge into every glass half empty.../
    Ask me who sent me/
    and I will have no answer/
    My sun is Aquarius, moon is a Cancer/
    and the opposite of friendly banter/
    is invoked by Venus in the house of Mars..../
    My rhymes are deep as lifelong scars,/
    but marginalized cus I argue wit lies
    and spit WAY too many bars/
    Futher than far from easily replaced/
    Entwined in time and place/
    my rhyme climbs out my mind at crazy pace.../
    Grit and grace collide like face with mace/
    in the presence of heartless Jakes/
    Take/ the love I recieve/
    and spread it like seeds or infectious disease/
    The illest of steez/
    spit with chillest of ease/
    and no casualties in the release..../
    Absolutely SWEET.../
    The fullfillment is deep and complete...

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    dumdumdj commented on All Out

    04-26-2010

    i love this piece....the vibe is awesome and u use great forms of image that are shared well with words
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    bluewolf commented on All Out

    03-18-2010

    With each line read this piece turned into a rap, music and all, in my mind. The imagery is excellent, flow smooth and ryhthm lyrical and honed. Good work.
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    MizBlaze

    03/18/2010

    thank you... if you are interested you can hear the audio at youtube.com/thealyb

    LadyLuck commented on All Out

    03-17-2010

    whoa that was like totally hott!! My mind had a hard time keepin up with that very well done
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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