Look Upon God

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    Look Upon God
    Look upon God with eyes half shut;
    He is almost too bright to see.
    A man is often a different man
    than the man that he wishes to be.
    The sun is so much dimmer
    than the stars that are unseen.
    A planet blue a million miles;
    And you are in love with me...

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    spbsdude commented on Look Upon God

    07-31-2009

    love it, love it, love it. So much said in so few words. That is what good poetry is all about.
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    monkyntz commented on Look Upon God

    06-11-2009

    that was awesome that was beautiful short and to the point you are a pleasure to read love your style i don't have to think it reads itself
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    MizBlaze

    06/11/2009

    Thank you brotha... You flatter me.

    kdavidscott1 commented on Look Upon God

    06-04-2009

    This is very good Blaze - when you are focused on God you can proceed with effort to be the person you are meant to be - and our love for God is always there as we look for him each day through our cloudy existence... KD
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    MizBlaze

    06/10/2009

    Trudat kd...This universe is huge but also small. Understanding is rare and true love is quite the miraculous spectacle to behold indeed....

    IzzyGumbo commented on Look Upon God

    06-04-2009

    This is magnificent! Bravo and again!! This is a fave, your words are just beautiful and show a wisdom of the Sages. Much love dear one and keep writing!
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    MizBlaze

    06/10/2009

    Thanks. My husband is a beautiful adoring man and I wrote it for him. Confusion bout religion is rampant these days, small things often overlooked, and Love in its truest form is practically miraculous...My soul is old and sometimes gets so tired...Thanks for reading.

    dahlusion commented on Look Upon God

    06-03-2009

    This is just beautiful in all of its mystical, spiritual, and talented expression. "And you are in love with me..." — what a solid statement of confidence. You can say this to me at anytime, day or night.
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    dahlusion

    06/03/2009

    I can not believe that I am the only one to rate this gem.

    MizBlaze

    06/10/2009

    Thanks for the love, DAH. You beautiful, beautiful man...

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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