Danielle (It's Me)

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    Danielle (It's Me)

    I am free...
    To do what?
    The shadows on my face are like
    whispers in a crowd.
    I seem so faded now.
    But I just want you to know,
    love,
    so is everyone else;
    Not that 6 billion wrongs
    are suddenly making one right.
    I'm sitting across the street
    at "their" house
    only it's not their house anymore;
    - It's some other sad lost fools.
    Coincidence.
    I'm scribbling broken words
    and spilling broken thoughts
    and remembering broken promises
    all at the same millisecond
    in the same odd way I used to....
    I'm staring across a strip of asphalt
    at your house and you know;
    It's 10:00 and there are four people
    inside those walls...
    But it seems so empty to me.

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    jadienblu commented on Danielle (It's Me)

    07-09-2009

    i have been there... i say fuk it ...who wants to wait around for some love ,lost to humanity with in you....we are only human

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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