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    I
    Please allow me to introduce myself....
    I am sickness; I am health.
    I am poverty; I am wealth.
    If you didn't hear me coming,
    its because my name is stealth.
    I am indifference; I'm concern.
    I am stupid, so eager to learn.
    I am ice and my touch, it burns.
    I am love and I am hate.
    I am crooked, standing straight.
    Ten minutes early, I'm always late.
    I am your destiny, also your fate.
    I am joy and I am pain.
    My smile is sunshine;
    My tears, the rain.
    I can't go on, yet I sustain.
    It is I on whom you place the blame.
    I am righteous; I am wrong.
    I am short but all too long.
    I am forgiveness;
    I am sin.
    I am loss and still, I win
    I'm obesity, deathly thin.
    Only to be ousted,
    I manage to get in.
    I am your weeping heart when you force your face to grin.
    It is only where I start, that brother you begin.
    I'm with lonely husbands
    and all those crying wives.
    Will shout to end the violence
    but still conceal a knife.
    I am with the poor man
    in his eternal strife.
    I implore you; Introduce yourself!
    I, my friend, am life.

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    SEVEN commented on I

    07-30-2009

    I give it two thumbs up....and a eight finger wave...Good job... Kudos
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    speed11935 commented on I

    07-02-2009

    It's honest and real, though sometimes pessimistic
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    MizBlaze

    07/02/2009

    Pessimistic? Perhaps you are looking at the glass half empty...for each negative there is a positive...that is life in the rawest form...

    sincere commented on I

    05-13-2009

    I wish I could've made this a 10, I just can't stop reading ur stuff. Its really good. Addicting!
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    amberain commented on I

    04-20-2009

    can't say anything but ...great. very well done. the feeling just jumps up at you.
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    Realistic commented on I

    02-05-2009

    Bravo! well done!
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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