In Waking Dreams

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    In Waking Dreams

    Worry melts ands freezes,
    cycles dripping down my spine
    Hot pursuit within
    between physical and logical,
    spiritual and mind
    Floating on a balanced wave
    of face and space and rhyme
    Tequila is a drunkard's dream,
    but classy with salt and a lime
    Swallow with a smile
    but snapshot store the taste
    Stay kind, unwind and stay a while
    But be sure to jot the time and place
    Plenty of bread and wine and dreams
    But not so much there's some to waste
    So many frowns and ups and downs
    A smile my friend is a strange sweet case
    Miracles above us
    entwining in between
    Fragments of a memory
    waking and in dreams.

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    terrellharrisjr commented on In Waking Dreams

    05-10-2009

    I really like the rhyming scheme used in this poem. I also dig the phrasing. Nice work.

    dahlusion commented on In Waking Dreams

    05-06-2009

    Poetic perfection in all of its creation. Love the flow and metering. My foot was tapping the floor in 6/8 tempo.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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