Beast

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    • christianprep
    • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

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    Books are alsome..Expechaly fictional books. Books that are not true... That's how this poem came about... Well more from Grendle then any thing... Plus I tried to make another scary poem.. Hope u like please comment and rate

    Beast
    Twisted light
    In thy eyes
    Of a burden fate
    A monster provels
    Tell the unknown,
    swipes at last
    Blood and gore
    Stretched as fare,
    As the eye can see
    Screens ecowing the forest floor
    But the hero is a god,
    But who is a fake,
    For he's just a man.
    Who fought and won
    So the beast was beat,
    But his spirit still remains.
    With eyes of a hawlk
    He watches each pray
    With murdering eyes
    He sets people a flame

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    Armadillokid commented on Beast

    03-23-2011

    wow, vibrantly creative here. this is really cool. This reminds me of a poem i wrote. Armadillokid aka Sydney
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    christianprep

    03/23/2011

    I was trying to have fun writing that one. But its not really what i like to write, but i still had fun righting it that was the point in that poem, but i really don't like it...... Put it up anyways..lol thanks you did not have to read this poem

    Lunabella commented on Beast

    02-02-2011

    I like it, it's dark and gory and lot like some of the stuff i dont let anyone see, but its a nicer gentler version. good write. -Luna
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    christianprep

    02/03/2011

    Its just a poem.. I wrote it because i was bored thought it would be fun to wrote a scary poem

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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