Cauious and Open

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    • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

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    it does not make since at first and changes all together yes i know. but i like it the way it is bc it still sends a meaning. don't get a fended by this poem if you don't like it still please be nice but honest at the same time, oh and i fixed the problems if there is anymore problems with this poem let me know

    Cauious and Open

    Its built in you

    to make you glow

    its apart of who you are

    you can't escape it

    so don't even try

     

    Your world crashes at your feet

    and all you can do is deny it

    but at lest you have one at you side

    one in your heart

    that keeps you sane

     

    the mountains are still

    while you move

    the earth rumbles as you fall

     

    the world has an end

    yet you don't believe it

    where and when?

     

    face the facts

    i believe that the bible is alive

    there is suffering there is help

     

    My friend i beg you

    open your eyes

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    dumplin commented on Cauious and Open

    03-25-2010

    Instead of 'exap' did you mean 'escape'? The numerous spelling errors were a bit distracting, but this is a very spiritual poem.
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    christianprep

    03/25/2010

    Yes that is what i ment its been so long since i wrote that i don't even remember writing it

    christianprep

    11/03/2010

    Ill be fixing it i did not do the spell check i ment to thats why but thanks for letting me know i see it myself

    christianprep

    11/03/2010

    Well its all fixed let me know if there is any thing else i need to fix with this peom thanks

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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