Being Free

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    • blackrose95
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    Poem Commentary

    This is from my mom's point of view. I wanted to tell the story but also add a little ha factor. Hope I did a good job!

    Being Free

    I saved you from dying

    And what do I get in return: you lying.

    I protected you from your demon,

    I gave you your right to be a freeman.

    Yet you stab me in the back,

    Make me pack,

    And tell me that we belong in a little shack.

    You might have been laughing then at me.

    But now the tables are turned, the roles are reversed, I now posses the key.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                -Blackrose95

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    MarionYost commented on Being Free

    02-13-2010

    10! This is awesome, Sad that this is the situation, but.. Great write. See? Pain ALWAYS makes for a good poem. All the best -Marion-
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