You'll Never See

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  • blackrose95
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Poem Commentary

This explains itself.

You'll Never See

I see her curled up in a little ball

Wishing, but knowing you’ll never call.

That’s it, I’m done.

In my mind, you’re foregone.

You lost the right to be a dad.

When you hurt mom, you condescending cad.

You’ll never see me go to prom

Or be able to intimidate Dick or Tom.

You’ll never see me graduate

Nor me on my 2nd or 3rd date.

You’ll never see me get married,

Never see your grandchildren being carried.

Not that you’ll care.

But one day, even if you cry out in despair.

Even if you beg for us to try to repair.

I won’t see you, hear you. I’m unaware

That you’re even there.

Maybe then you’ll realize that you shouldn’t have an affair.

                                                                                                                                                                                                -Blackrose95

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Fallenangel87 commented on You'll Never See

02-18-2010

The intensity of the emotion is great, the flow is awesome. Nice. -Fallenangel87-

MarionYost commented on You'll Never See

02-17-2010

MY GOD! Your Work just keeps getting better as you go. Amazing! Great flow, Nice, strong emotion. I love it definite 10... If you haven't yet.. please read "Mother" ... Great job! All the best -Marion-

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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