My Barely Bearable Desires Part 1

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I've decided to write a few poems on this topic. I hope you like it.

My Barely Bearable Desires Part 1

 What can I do?

To get rid of these feelings, to bury them. To lie, even though their true?

I can’t-I won’t. I care about her.

I want to hear that sweet ring of laughter

Every day of my life.

I don’t care about what anyone else thinks, if she cared and could wait, she would be worth the price.

But she doesn’t.

She mustn’t.

I am forced to bury these burning feelings of escalating one-sided passion and love;

When I feel like screaming it to the world from above.

The reason to keep these unbearable desires locked tightly away in my heart?

To keep that one pure light in my life. I’d rather be her friend than be apart.

I’m a coward. Comfortable. Safe. But still… a coward.

With one look, one conversation, she unknowingly captured-

Me; mind, body, and soul.

                                               -Blackrose95

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MarionYost commented on My Barely Bearable Desires Part 1

01-26-2010

You're making your way onto my list of favorite poets FAST. I can Totally relate to this History repeats itself & repetition hurts.. Love is a bittersweet thing, I've been through it time& again... Am right now... Great write once again. All the best -Marion-

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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