The Perfect Stranger

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  • Angst
    • blackrose95
    • A complete poem is one where an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found the words ...

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    I don't know where this came from.

    The Perfect Stranger

    My heart’s breaking

    With every step your taking

    Away from me.

    I wanna scream, I wanna yell

    But how do I tell,

    a perfect stranger that I care?!

    I’m at a loss for words,

    I can’t explain how much this hurts.

    I see you making friends,

    I know a heart always mends.

    And despite my soul being in debris,

    I ‘m happy you’re forgetting me.

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    MarionYost commented on The Perfect Stranger

    02-11-2010

    Yeah, I'm going through this RIGHT NOW, a guy I've NEVER met in reality... pathetic, I know.. But whatever, I wish him well. This is a great poem I love the flow, Great wording. My favorite line(s) are : "I know a heart always mends.And despite my soul being in debris,I‘m happy you’re forgetting me." Great write thanks for sharing this. All the best -Marion-
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    Tempy commented on The Perfect Stranger

    02-11-2010

    oh this is sadenning. Yet still a fantastically structured write
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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