Dream on

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Love me tender say you do say it proudly if its true stay with me and I'll say it too oh my dear I do Love you.

Dream on

Stay with me oh say you will
if only for the night
and when the morning comes
you will disappear from my sight
but oh to know how deep it goes the love
I have for you if only you come to me and never leave me alone

I think I've found my  home but I don't have the key
to unlock the door I can't be sure
but I want it so bad and I'm hoping there's more

do you love me please say you do
and then together forever us two
and I'll say I do and you'll say it too
and forever together oh please say its true

but now I must leave you don't know my name
and I am afraid we will end up the same
alone and tired bitter and old
from being left too long in the cold
I just want to sleep will you rock me gently
and dance with me in my dreams
and then when I wake you're last name I'd take and be together with
you forever. 

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Crush commented on Dream on

01-15-2013

I like this. The emotion is tangible, brittle and real. Nice.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Proof of angels 1
This thing called love. 0
Wave walker 0
Renewed by grace 0
what good is it 0
Mr. Sun 1
Billy Bob ( my sweet companion) 0
Restoration 0
But God 3
Raging war 0
Peace be still 0
Midnight blue 1
Don't let go 0
I'm (not) all alone 0
where are you (my love) 0
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Burning heart 0
Anything 0
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Heave's Song 0
the Peace keeper 0
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Let it rain ( consuming fire) 0
Morning light 0
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Winter's joy 0
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Blooming (the season of love) 1
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Heavenly Gates 0
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Dream on 1
Good Night my love 1
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Dear Mr. President 0
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why do I love you 1
three simple words 0
may I have this dance? 1
three, two, one 1
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One Day 0
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don't leave me. 1
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six feet above 0
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Christmas star 1
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3,2,1...boom! 1
What the? 1
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Final Good bye 1
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Revelation 1
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Stay Forever 3