broken apart

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    I had a friend for ten years, she was like family to me , and then suddenly almost without warning,,, its over... I have so many emotions in me I don't know how to react... but I de regret the last words and hope that GOd will forgive me, I do for give her, and thats all I know to do.

    broken apart

     I stood beside you
     I called you friend
     I prayed to God that it would never end

    but then in a shudder, or the blinking of an eye
    our friendship is over as I watch it slowly die

    Ten years I had committed
    to careing for you
    but suddently I realize it was all in vain
     did you ever care or were they empty worlds
    did you ever love or was it simply for your own selfish gain
    but maybe the fault is mine and if is should be than I beg you
    if its not to late for you to forgive me.

    I didn't want to end like this, the words came out all wrong
    but I knew it was coming I knew it all along.
    still the pain inside me I could not predict
    and suddenly like a virus I'm felling very sick
    for who could predict that you would split with snears
    and at last we would lie broken after all these years.

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    susanismith commented on broken apart

    07-08-2010

    If you felt that you've done the right thing by that person with all your heart, theirs nothing you've could've done different. Things happen for a reason, and their are people out their that just doesn't share the same views... This poem touched me in a personal level, for I've been that person who've lost many friends do to me always giving...and the one time I could not that was the end. Thanks for this piece spoken to me.

    Tarlton009

    07/14/2010

    thank you and I take your words to heart for they are some of the sweetest I have heard in a really long time.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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