Fear Me

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  • Death

    Fear Me
    My strength is amazing
    My power is pure
    Death is awaiting
    And grieving is sure

    How much blood will be lost?
    How much pain will be found?
    You catch me alone.
    You end up on the ground.


    I'll steal your soul
    I'll bring you pain
    Death and destruction is all yours to gain

    I am superior
    Inside and out
    Fear me just, there's no point to doubt

    Shiver, shiver, shiver
    Cower in fear
    Your fate, your end is almost here

    How much blood will be lost?
    How much pain will be found?
    Your flesh will be torn like a coon to a hound

    I'm a cut above
    The best of the best
    You upset me
    I lay you to rest

    Come closer, closer child
    I only bite
    Cower, cower, cower
    I wish you goodnight

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    AbysmalGoddess commented on Fear Me

    06-29-2009

    Twilight fan? Delicious imagery, you really instill your reader with a sense of power and potential danger. Nice work!
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    Shelby

    06/30/2009

    Twiliht? Heck no! Lol, more like Anne Rice. Twilight angers me deeply.

    dahlusion commented on Fear Me

    06-25-2009

    This is so perfectly Gothic that I want you to take a bite out of my neck then feed the blood back to me through a long, full kiss. This is a 10! Great write!!
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    erbj commented on Fear Me

    03-11-2009

    I really like this one.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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