Like a Knot

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    Like a Knot
    The scent of your skin lingers at the tips of my fingers
    How I crave you sweet body, intertwined with mine
    A knot we shall be
    Tied tight, it will never weaken
    Just us and the world
    Light from the window radiates from every part of your body
    I can almost see myself in the transparency
    A mirror
    A reflection of my desires
    A reflection of my heart
    A reflection of my life

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    laydbak1 commented on Like a Knot

    08-03-2009

    A very strong first line.. Set a good tone for a very nice piece about two people sharing of the flesh, passionate affection, and a strong fealty of the heart... Good write..
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    AbysmalGoddess commented on Like a Knot

    06-29-2009

    Strong emotion in this one, erotic, yet so loving and so loyal. I love the first line, that made it...it just set the whole mood and the rest just carried it through so smoothly. Excellent work!
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    Shelby

    06/30/2009

    Thank you so much, dear goddess!

    dahlusion commented on Like a Knot

    06-25-2009

    "The scent of your skin lingers at the tips of my fingers" — a very erotic line with much creative sweetness lingering on my mind. This is an exceptionally good write with lustful longing, imagery, and flow.
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    dahlusion

    06/25/2009

    I gave you a 10 but it scored as a 7——huh?

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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