Love me, cancer

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    This one isn't the best, but it's kind of about loving someone that hates you. Not a fun topic, but pretty damn common, so bare with me?

    Love me, cancer

    Kill me sweet, you toxic voice
    Live or die, Oh what a choice!
    Poison daggers, lipstick smudges
    Cry, rant, stab, scream, love your grudges
    My death is your life, my love is your death
    Draw me in, your poison breath
    Cancer cancer, kill me sweet
    Your deathly glares make me complete

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    blindmaster commented on Love me, cancer

    08-08-2009

    This is a poem of a begginning writer so please continue to write. I like how you use your everyday experience.
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    laydbak1 commented on Love me, cancer

    08-03-2009

    I'd like to think this is about a person of the zodiac, but... Hate the topic, but well written on it....
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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