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    Well, this sin;t much a poem either. But I wrote it when my ex and I were together but having problems.

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     You tell me you love me, I don't think you mean it
    You tell me you mean it, I don't think you want to
    You tell me you want to, I don't think you're truthful
    You tell me you're truthful, I don't think I'm worth it
    You tell me I'm worth it, I tell you I love you
    I tell you I love you, you don't think I mean it
    I tell you I mean it, you don't think I want to
    I tell you I want to, you don't think I'm truthful
    I tell You I'm truthful, you don't think you're worth it
    I tell you you're worth, you tell me you love me

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    laydbak1 commented on No title

    08-03-2009

    Nice piece of brain work on this one... the up and back method... drives well all the way to the honey pit ending.... Nice job...
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    Artie commented on No title

    07-08-2009

    I like this. I've had so many of these revolving arguments, where the finger and the blame, gets pointed back and forth so many times, that you eventually forget what's going on. Nice write, very smple, yet full of truth.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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