Fear Me

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    Fear Me

     I have eyes in the back of my head
    I have cat like reflexes.
    I have super hearing
    I have an eighth sense.
    I have powers of persuasion,
    I know what you are thinking.
    I can influence what you are feeling
    you can't play me.
    I come back at you like the
    day comes back at the night,
    you can't get rid of me.

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    arronpalmer commented on Fear Me

    11-13-2010

    I like this version, it has the heart-beat pace of a thriller. But I am so glad you took the suggestion of a revisit with grace and open-mindedness, as the latest version is great. Your openness is admirable, well done :) But yeah, this was never bad!
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    smoothdame

    11/15/2010

    I put my poetry out there to get honest opinions I am not afraid to hear the truth, my goal is to improve my craft so I welcome suggestions.

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Fear Me

    11-13-2010

    What I like about this one is that if it comes off like a riddle. I wanted to flip the screen over and write on the back things it could be. The flow is a little off. I will hazard a guess a cross between catwoman and poison ivy. Lol........E
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    smoothdame

    11/15/2010

    I just started writing one day and this came out of it, I guess I was on a catwoman, poison Ivy kick we all have our moments, I was glad I was able to use it.

    JadedJezzabel commented on Fear Me

    11-12-2010

    I kinda have to agree with MM on this one girl..........this could be a powerful poem.....but you cut it short........tweak the form make it flow and say what you really want to say.
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    smoothdame

    11/12/2010

    will do thanks for the truth and thank you for readind and responding to my poem.

    mustascheman commented on Fear Me

    11-11-2010

    Interesting...but where is the rest of it? It's almost like a riddle, begging to be solved just to see how 'bad' you really are. Write more, give me something to 'fear'. A.T.
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    smoothdame

    11/12/2010

    okay I will take it back and revisit this one. Thanks for the honesty and thanks for taking the time to read and respond to my poem.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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