Alone

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  • Lost Love

    Alone

     Banished to this neverending valley of loneleness,
    utter solitude is all I have left of you.
    My conscience was guilty but I never saw through
    my own selfishness that, you were the only one for me.
    So now I am alone, with no one to blame but myself,
    but still I claim not to comprehend why you are only
    but a dream to me now, no longer a sweet reality.

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    arronpalmer commented on Alone

    11-12-2010

    A very concise, tenderly heart-breaking poem here SM. Says a lot in few lines, which makes for a very noteworthy poem. Well done :)
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    smoothdame

    11/12/2010

    Thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. Would you mind reading more of my poetry, I wouldn't mind reading some of your poetry.

    JadedJezzabel commented on Alone

    11-12-2010

    when relationships end it can be gut wrenching and hard to deal with.....very well written expression of that.
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    smoothdame

    12/01/2010

    thank you for reading my poem.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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