Waiting

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    Waiting

     I have been waiting to love you
    in a way that you've never been loved before.
    I have been waiting to touch you
    in a way that you've never been touched before.
    I have been waiting to hold you
    in a way that you've never been held before.
    I have been waiting to kiss you
    in a way that you've never been kissed before.
    I have been waiting to want you
    in a way that you've never been wanted before.
    I have been waiting to need you
    in a way that you've never been needed before.
    I have been waiting to trust you
    in a way that you've never been trusted before.
    I have been waiting to cherish you
    in a way that you've never been cherished before.
    I have been waiting to win you
    in a way that you've never been won before.
    I have been waiting to desire you
    in a way that you've never been desired before.
    I have been waiting to show you things
    you never dreamed possible because you
    my love are well worth the wait.

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    JadedJezzabel commented on Waiting

    11-03-2010

    fantastic poem of need and longing..............reminds of a song called " i never wanted "
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    Charlie23 commented on Waiting

    10-13-2010

    I love this smoothdame! It so powerful, the feeling one gets while reading it when they imagine the love of their life.... beautiful poem!
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    smoothdame

    10/14/2010

    thank you so much for reading and responding to my poem.

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Waiting

    10-06-2010

    I like this piece. I like the longing behind the words and the straightforwardness. well done!
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    smoothdame

    10/08/2010

    thank you for taking the time to read my poem and make a comment on it. Thank you for giving your input.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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