All of me

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All of me

How dare you change your mind
and stop loving me, when I gave you everything.
How dare you smile and laugh with her,
while I am left with all the pain.
How dare you comment that I was the one to blame,
when you cheated, lied and played your mind games.
It hurts to breathe sometimes,
yet I take pride in the fact that each breath I take,
proves I can live without you.
I'm taking back my feelings because the saddest
thing in the world is loving someone who used to love you.
I swear honey I don't miss you, I miss who I thought you were,
kind, beautiful and worthy of my heart.
High off of love once, now in a downward spiral
yet I am grateful we were once connected.
Crazy but I like the way it hurts,
you have taught me the hardest lesson of love,
it coldly ends but the fire is worth the pain.

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sweetchinee commented on All of me

12-03-2010

This poem was definitely written with a lot of emotion which I feel as I read.... beautifully expressed... looking forward to reading more....

smoothdame

12/03/2010

thank you it was very emotional for me to write but it was something that i needed to get off my chest.

Chaos128 commented on All of me

12-01-2010

It reminds me of a Friedrich Nietzsche: "That which does not kill us makes us stronger." Although most of us could do just fine without the experience. A common theme singularly and originally expressed.

smoothdame

12/01/2010

thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my poem.

Maxsbabyforever commented on All of me

12-01-2010

My... You continue to amaze me.... Keep writing. It's amazing the talent you have...

smoothdame

12/01/2010

I will and thank you for the love and reading and responding to my poem.

JadedJezzabel commented on All of me

12-01-2010

i hear you i think we all like the way it hurts............write on

smoothdame

12/01/2010

thank you I will. I know I write alot about love but it helps me through the tough times.

WordSlinger commented on All of me

12-01-2010

I hear that, we all are burnt, I believe in one way or the other, or fried, ty WS

smoothdame

12/01/2010

thank you so much for taking the time to read and respond to my work.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

smoothdame’s Poems (29)

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Chains 3
Truth bout me 1
Inner us 1
Letting go 3
For you 2
The Game 1
Unattractive 6
Confusion 3
All of me 6
Raw 3
Fear me revisited 6
Fear Me 4
I can be 4
Illusion Gone 5
Scraps 6
Stand (The Patriot Act) 6
Made to love you 2
Waiting 3
Like That 3
I want to fall in love 3
Submerged revisited 0
Let's Breakup 2
Silence 1
Alone 2
U 2
Good Enough 3
School is a Business 2
You had your day 2