I want to fall in love

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    I want to fall in love

     To feel, to be taken in, engulfed, lovingly crushed,
    in something greater than myself.
    Intimate symbolism of what the world should be
    when we are together.
    I want to know what love is,
    I want to feel what love is, I want you to
    show me.
    To understand, to remember, to begin again
    with innocence restored.

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    sweetchinee commented on I want to fall in love

    10-29-2010

    simple and real.... i like the way u said innocence restored... very sweet...
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    smoothdame

    10/30/2010

    Thank you for reading and responding to my poem. I wanted my poem to be real and honest. Thanks for your comments.

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on I want to fall in love

    10-06-2010

    The wanting in this poem is palpable. I love the honesty. Thanks for sharing.
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    smoothdame

    10/08/2010

    Thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my poem.

    smoothdame commented on I want to fall in love

    03-16-2010

    I wrote this poem at the beginning of a new relationship. I felt that it was a honest record of my feelings at that point in my life.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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