Help on to my pride

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    Help on to my pride
    Im not afraid to love, im afraid to loose.
    Life is a journey and love is the risk.
    Take my hand and hold your breath.
    Its a leap of faith but a leap together.
    Ive got a brusied and beaten heart.
    I know i should have held on to my pride.
    But life is a journey, its a one way ride.

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    cmlestrade commented on Help on to my pride

    08-20-2009

    True true true. It's all in that leap of faith. nicely written good meter and word choice.
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    erik commented on Help on to my pride

    02-20-2009

    nicely written, i feel the same way. You cant be afraid of love but there is always someone out there that is going to hurt you. Really for real those are the one's that really have no emotions inside. Heartless!!!!!!
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    keithrberryjr commented on Help on to my pride

    01-22-2009

    very nice poem.You are really a good writer.Keep it up.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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