Just a few beers

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    Just a few beers
    I see how much you drink and its killing me. You say that youve got control and there is nothing to fear its just a few beers. I ignored all the signs and warnings from others. You became anger and aggressive thats when i began to hide the scars. Youve got a problem that i just cant fix its much too late. The brusies will heal and the scars will fade but my heart cant take another hit, all because you wanted one more drink.

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    StandingBear commented on Just a few beers

    11-20-2009

    A stand up write from a stand up lady. Great stuff!
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    erik commented on Just a few beers

    02-20-2009

    It seems like you have a lot of pain inside, its good to express it into poetry! I think its amazing when u put your thoughts onto to paper. You realize the emotions you deal with and you dont really know how you feel till you let it all out and read it. Your just a few beers poem was sad to me. Im a very emotional guy, if it werent for me being in a happy state of mind your poem would have made me cry for sure.
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    keithrberryjr commented on Just a few beers

    01-13-2009

    Wow.some of the poems show so much emotion.You have an amazing gift with the knowledge you bring to poetry.I have always been told write what you know so when I look at this I think that it has happened to you.If you havent already, someday you will
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