Pain and Darkness

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    Pain and Darkness
    Pain and darkness;
    Something i cannot escape.

    No room to breathe
    I am incomplete.

    Feeling as if i wont make it;
    Tonight will be my last.

    The door is open yet closed;
    Dissatisfied and frustrated.

    Theres no more to say..
    I cannot live this way.

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    strahd21313 commented on Pain and Darkness

    07-22-2009

    You just described the exact way I feel at times.You had my attention from start to finish.I feel captivated at your poetic ability.
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    WordSlinger commented on Pain and Darkness

    02-05-2009

    No room to breathe I am incomplete. Feeling it
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    simanbar commented on Pain and Darkness

    01-28-2009

    Artfully communicated without excessive elaboration. Reminds me of Emily Dickenson.
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    dahlusion commented on Pain and Darkness

    01-23-2009

    beautifully painful…
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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