Project2, The ending

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    still just testing some new waters and styles of poetry hope this turns out okay =]

    Project2, The ending

    Tonight the world changed

    Life left my surreal air

    The young where left estranged

    Only the lonely where there

    Alone, together, and breathing this surreal air

    Tonight was the last of this

    The last of it all

    Days and nights synthesis

    We stood, watched the world fall

    Nothing we could do, after we gave it all

    Never to see him again

    Missing her continually

    Alone we stand together, let the pain begin

    This obscure seen standing in the ally

    This ending brought misperception

    Its laws where falsification

    And now here we all are

    Lost in this surreal location

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