I can't Believe it

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  • hannahxP
  • the greatest litterary work of my life, will be the last i ever wright.

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I can't Believe it

I just can't believe

you where standing next to me

we were both dieing

we were both crying

and we both thought we were alone.

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angelchaser commented on I can't Believe it

12-20-2010

Simple and sweet, very nice, I like it. Much said in few words.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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