your eyes

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    • hannahxP
    • the greatest litterary work of my life, will be the last i ever wright.

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    another write i found from around the realm of sixth or seventh grade

    your eyes

    i look into your eyes and see everything i have always wanted
    but I know when you look into my eyes you see nothing
    because I’m broken

    when I look into your eyes i see hope
    when I look into my heart all i see is dust
    because I’m regretful

    when I look into your eyes i see a sureness i long for
    you could search my eyes forever but i am never sure
    because I’m lost

    when I look into your eyes i see a dream for the future
    my eyes hold only regret for the past
    because I’m hopeless

    when I look into your eyes i see a fullness
    if you looked at me all you would see is empty
    because that’s exactly what i am

    when I look into your eyes i feel butterflies
    when you look at me i bet its nothing like that
    because I’m worthless

    when I look into your eyes i feel lost in all the wonders
    when you look at me you feel lost because there is nothing left to find
    because I'm all used up

    when I look into your eyes i see strength
    when you look at me all you can see is a child trying to stand alone
    because I’m weak

    when you see me will you ever see what i seen in you?

    will I ever be strong enough
    sure enough
    worth enough
    for the effort it takes to make a broken person whole?

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