Don't Be Like Me

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    • hannahxP
    • the greatest litterary work of my life, will be the last i ever wright.

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    I found this little thing on the inside cover of a journal i keep, i don't remember writing it, but its almost like a little letter i wrote, only to forget it and find it again another time.

    Don't Be Like Me

    Don't be like me my friend, for it is a lonley existance.
    Don't be like me my enemy, I wouldn't wish that on the worst of you.
    Don't be like me stranger, Becasue you may never find your peace.
    I live every day trying my hardest not to be like me.
    Dont. Be. Like. Me. 

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    Phission commented on Don't Be Like Me

    09-04-2012

    "Don't be like me my enemy, I wouldn't wish that on the worst of you." I made a sound as i read this line. love it !!! actually, the entire point is well represented through your choice and masterful manipulation of words. good show ! (10) left me sad but inspired.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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