"LIFES NEEDS"

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    "LIFES NEEDS"

     NOT ALWAYS HAVING TIME FOR ALL THE NEEDS IF THE DAY..
    YET THE NEEDS OF THE DAY ARE ALWAYS AT HAND...
    CAN'T SOMETIMES UNDERSTAND THIS CYCLE CALLED LIFE !!
    YET YOU TRY TO ACCOMPLISH ALL THAT YOU CAN..
    YOU TOO MUST FEEL THIS FRUSTRATION OF WHAT I SPEAK..
    FOR I OFTEN SEE YOUR JOURNEY LEAVING YOU SOMEWHAT WEAK !!
    NOT MERELY IN RESOLVE, BUT IN A LITTLE MOTIVATION !!
    YET EMOTIONALLY CHECKING OUT FOR A BREAK !!
    CAN BE A GRAVE TEMPTATION !!
    BUT JUST HANG IN THERE AND KNOW YOUR GONNA MAKE IT..
    ALL YOUR DREAMS AND GOALS WILL BE YOURS SIMPLY....... FOR THE TAKING !!

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    Tempestlady commented on "LIFES NEEDS"

    08-28-2009

    Nice inspirational piece. The bold font is a little distracting, and the spelling also. The message was great and there from the start. With a little more time and work on the rhyme, it could be great. I often think it's all overwhelming. This helped. Thanks. Write on.....
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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