AS WE LAY !!

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    AS WE LAY !!

     As we lay down beside one another
    What happens within our hearts and spirits?

    It's an ever present movement of healing and one of power and of might !

    As we lay down beside one another if your very quiet you can hear the melody of love..

    Trying to pull us together as one, not simply or merely with our bodies but in a much more profound way..

    In our souls, our very souls join together and merge in away that words cannot express !!

    While we sleep there is peace when there's love ..

    But only in the silence of mind and body and that of spirit can this transformation take it's rightful place within us,

    To only be obstructed by conscious pain and unforgiveness

    Held on tight by anger and pain

    Therefore the healing that I speak of cannot take it's rightful place

    Unless we adhere to the scheme of Gods plan for married couples!

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    Tempestlady commented on AS WE LAY !!

    08-26-2009

    Loved the line " if you are very quiet you can hear the melody". A work that is very applicable in todays age with the controversy over marriage. Liked the rhythm, missed the rhyme, the message is one that has been written about many many times. Good write....
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    warsaw

    08/26/2009

    Again thank you very much sincerely WARSAW

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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