Our Children

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    Our Children

    WHY CAN'T THEY SEE THEY'LL NEED YOU ALL THEIR LIVES?
    SOMETIMES WISDOM COMES TOO LATE, HIDDEN BEHIND TEARS AND LIE'S..
    WHERE DO YOU GO WHEN YOUR NO LONGER NEEDED?
    WHEN YOU'VE DUG THE GROUND AND PLANTED THE SEED ?
    YOU'VE PAVED THE ROAD AND REMOVED ALL THE ROCKS..
    YOU'VE OPENED THE DOOR AND BROKE ALL THE LOCKS..
    YOU'VE DONE ALL THIS FOR OTHERS TO PROCEED,
    AND IT CAME FROM THE HEART NO ONE NEEDED TO AGREE..
    YOU UNSELFLY GAVE ALL YOU HAD TO GIVE..
    IN HOPE SOMEONE ELSE'S LIFE WOULD BE OF GREATER VALUE TO LIVE..
    SOMETIMES YOU WERE SPREAD TO THIN AND NEEDED STRENGTH YOURSLF !!
    YET YOU MADE OTHER'S RICH WHILE YOU YOURSELF WENT WITHOUT WEALTH..
    THEY ALL CALLED YOU WHEN THEY WERE IN NEED.
    BUT WHEN THINGS WENT WELL FOR THEM THEIR FACES YOU WOULDN'T SEE..
    SO YOUR NOW ALONE NO LONGER NEEDED LIKE BEFORE !!
    THOUGH YOU STILL HAVE MUCH TO OFFER NO ONE SEEMS TO COME BACK FOR MORE..
    THESE ARE THE CHILDREN YOU BORE AND RAISED !!
    WE PARENTS WANT OUR FLOWERS NOW !!
    NOT WHEN WE'RE SLEEP IN THE GRAVE..

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    Tempestlady commented on Our Children

    01-28-2010

    A blunt poem about the giving hearts in parents. Well written and liked the bold type. I never thought about it but guess i'll send mine flowers more often....hmmm....Write on.....

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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    When is it "Not Okay" to cry? 1
    The business of Business 1
    OUR HEARTS PRIORITY 2
    Do You Really Have Love? 1
    Is it easy to be you my friend? 1
    Our Children 1
    "HUSBAND" 2
    "LIFES NEEDS" 1
    "BABE" 0
    "DOORS" 0
    YOUR SO VERY SPECIAL 0
    " THANK YOU GOD"!! 0
    I AM "ENTHUSIASTIC
    "!
    0
    AS WE LAY !! 1
    WHERE DOES TIME GO 1
    HOW MUCH MORE GOD 1
    THE HIDDEN SECRET 0
    THERE WAS LAUGHTER TODAY !!!!!! 2
    THE POWER FOF RECOVERY 0
    CHOICES 1
    Bureaucracy of life 1
    To reach the unreahable 1
    A place I've been before 0
    When I looked up, what did I see? 0
    THE MEDIOCRITY OF IT ALL 1
    If I were another 0
    AS I THINK? SO IS IT.. 0
    WHEN DID I FIRST LOVE YOU ( MY CHILD) 2
    CAN YOU HEAR THE MUSIC 0
    IT'S PRETTY LONELY UP HERE (AT THE TOP) 1
    "IF" 5
    Why Me? 0