"IF"

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    Just for those that have loved and lost true love, only they will understand this, as I do.

    "IF"

    If you run out into the rain and get wet
    I'll be your unbrella to sheild and protect...
    If you need shelter from the raging storm
    I'll be your overcoat to keep you warm........
    If you need new shoes to look your best
    I'd buy you every color, and you'd look better then the rest..
    If you needed a hat to keep your head warm
    I'd knit you a magical one that would never get torn...
    If you feel down and began to cry
    I'd ease your pain and wipe your eyes..
    If you became a cloudy day...
    I'd be the sky full of sun rays..
    If you loose your way in a dark night..
    I'll be to your rescue with a bright light..
    If you grow hungry and need a bite to eat..
    I'll be the one to feed you abd raise you back on your feet..
    If you become discouraged and dismay fills your heart..
    I'll find away to lift you up and point you towards a new start..
    If you grow old and can't even walk
    I'll know what you need and you won't have to talk..
    If you need anything, anything at all..
    I'd stop the earth from spinning so you wouldn't dare fall..
    If you die before I do and leave me here alone..
    I'd find away to heaven and live there with you alone..
    If I died before you, I couldn't bear the pain..
    Of in death being without you so I;d come alive again.... IF....

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    inspiredbyluv commented on "IF"

    06-18-2009

    that was a wonderful poem and i do agree that if everyone could love this way the world would be a better place thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem

    warsaw

    08/03/2009

    Thank you, however I meant it for the "LOVE OF ONES LIFE" it isn't for everyone just special ones that fill your heart, as you may know we can't seem to love everyone exactly the same huh? smile

    warsaw

    08/03/2009

    Thank you, however I meant it for the "LOVE OF ONES LIFE" it isn't for everyone just special ones that fill your heart, as you may know we can't seem to love everyone exactly the same huh? smile

    frog commented on "IF"

    06-17-2009

    This poem reminds me of myself. A long time ago someone explained to me that I had a habit of giving love to people who weren't capable of reciprocating it. That pattern of behavior for me created these feelings expressed so well here.

    warsaw

    08/03/2009

    What you posess in your heart and spirit is priceless and belongs to someone special don't throw it away just because you gave it to someone didn't understand your love, don't give up that special person is yet coming and will deserve all you have to give and return it two-fold back to you, bless you

    Jsa4 commented on "IF"

    06-02-2009

    Koodos....loved it!! It would be a better world if everyone loved this way! Good writing....thanks for sharing something so wonderful!

    warsaw

    06/17/2009

    Thanks for the appreciation, I actually felt this from my heart, I really wish I could be these things for those that I love, sometimes this world can feel so cruel and harsh and lonely,and it envokes the mother Bear in all of us that want to love even more..

    Tempestlady commented on "IF"

    06-02-2009

    Very wordy, but good. Liked he ryme and cadence of it. My son says it sounded kinda despirate. A true ode to love.

    warsaw

    06/17/2009

    meant to be "Wordy" isn't the expression of life quiet wordy when one trys to express emotion? smile

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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