Rust

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    Rust

    Rust

     

     

    I take some battles

    then I move away.

    We love the dust of time

    that gathers in the clouds

    right before it rains.

     

    I can’t cry

    and so I don’t fly

    From here.

     

     

    I wonder where my gift

    of strength died,

    What did it die for?

    and

    where did the shelter of hope fade to.

    Cause,

     I cant even find a grain

     that dissolves in the rain

    before

    I lose grip and I

     Can’t restrain.

     

     I can’t cry

    and so I don’t fly

    From here.

     

    I wander around in this shadow

    all alone

    I write my lost battles on

    a forsaken stone;

    right before I drift away

    in the wind

    along with that grain

    of sand.

    That slips through our hands

    in the hole of darkened lands.

     

    This tear turns to dust

    Here I stay and slowly

    it begins to rust.

     

    I can’t cry

    and so I don’t fly

    From here.

     

    LancE M. Stephens…On

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    InfinityKnott commented on Rust

    12-26-2009

    Things blow away or slips through our hands like the sands of time. If you don’t cry about your losses than you haven’t really come to term with them there-for you remain suspended in the moment. Allowing it to rust away at your innards. Well done. I had to read it a few time to capture the meaning, but very well done.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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