Subtle Sympathy

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  • Letting Go

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    This poem came about when I was in a moment of thinking of someone I had lost. My room mate just woke up and as he passed by me he noticed I was looking sort of down and asked me if i was OK. I lied and told him I was great why? He said Oh I thought I saw a tears in your eyes. I lied again and said no I just yawned. It was crazy because my room mate doesn't notice anything about anyone due to the fact he suffers severe dep[ression. So this small poem immediately came to the forefront of my mind.

    Subtle Sympathy

    Subtle Sympathy

     

    Appreciate the slight gesture;

    the brief condolence,

    From this I cannot hide,

    Must of caught the glimmer;

    the tear in my eye.

     

    Had to bid-farewell-

      to that one,

    you know: the Sun;

    just before the rain comes.

    Before

    I come

    Undone..

     

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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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