True Love

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A poem I wrote many years ago when I first fell in love with the white dove, a time when we lived in the vey clouds of heaven. Even through the love has come and gone in this life, this poem will forever immotalize the love we shared forever buring in the very stars of heaven, for true love never dies...

True Love

 

Upon the wretched winds of sorrow,
I had a dream of a wondrous tomorrow.

I saw a soul so fair so true,
That soul I saw was you.

Our souls meet upon a glance,
And so our hearts beat into a trance,
Long into the endless star lighted night,
Our souls plunged into the burning light.

Out of the darkness and loneliness we came,
Our hearts still lied frightened and shivering all the same,
If only we could be so tame.

The beast is raging within my heart,
It has been loaving you from the start,
And so I pray to God our two souls shall never part.

Your beauty is so fair,
Your heart is so true,
And now all that I desire is you.

But so many barriers lie within our lives,
Which keeps us longing for the strives.

Barriers are meant to be broken,
And both our hearts have spoken,
To give the Devil his token,
To rage into the bombastic night,
Laughing full heartedly into danger of the fight,
And I pray that our fate is what’s right.

Although our two souls just meet upon one day,
I know in my heart that you are here to stay.

And so I put aside my fears,
And wipe away all the years of pain,
Growing in tears,
And I invite you into the deepest darkest dwelling of my soul,
And I’ll give you my heart as the toll,
I’ll you not to break my heart in two,
And to always be true,
I will give you anything you ask,
I will make it my life long task.

And so now,
New dangerous ground we embark on,
And so the Devil will retreat and be gone,
Because only fear he can dwell on,
And fear is not something we can share,
Because dangerous lives we love to bare,
And so the reality of the world we shall tear,
Our hearts begging to care,
And the true love we are beginning to share!

I refuse to let this die,
And so pursing this love I will try,
For anything less would be a lie,
I can not live a life that is not true,
Just like I don’t want to live a life without you.

I know I have not known you long,
But I do know the angels are singing our song,
How can any true love be wrong?

What is right,
What is wrong,
Can our love become so strong?

There are questions that I see,
I know not what the future is to be,
But I do know what I feel,
And I know what I feel is real.

It’s not a love of me,
And it is not a love you,
It’s together that it’s a love of two,
It’s together that this love is true!!!

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BlackButterfly1 commented on True Love

10-24-2010

I remember how it feels to float on the cloud of love, especially when the love is new. You did a good job reminding us of that feeling of being in love.

angel33614

10/24/2010

Sad that all things must come to an end and most often do not last as long as we would have liked, while relationship may come and go i still believe that true love lives on in the heart of soul of the borrower. As high as I fly in the clouds of heaven during this time is as far as I fell into the very depths of hell and the darkest places within the sahdows, but this story is another poem entirely. Thank you again for you comment as they are always greatly appreciated and always welcome with open arms and heart! Puriity of the soul, journey well!!! with grace and humility ANGEL- POB for life! aka A blind man walking...

Artie commented on True Love

09-26-2010

You've got a lot of feeling in this one. I really enjoyed this - 10 from me

angel33614

10/04/2010

When I wrote this one I was flying in cloud nine, as in most thing in life it was short lived and as high as I flew is as far as I fell as I soon became the fallen angel of the darkness. Thanks again for the klind review and comments as they are always greatlt appreciated and always welcome! Purity of the soul, journey well!!! with grace and humility ANGEL aka A blind man walking

Embraced commented on True Love

09-13-2010

Classic love poem! This was all warm and fuzzy inside! 10 from me.

ApaqRasgirl commented on True Love

08-12-2010

wow, I loved this angel, this one reminded me so much of the love I shared with my late hubby, a true love for all times....great write dear and it flowed so smooth.......thanks for this wonderful read....loves ya asha

Sylvia2046 commented on True Love

07-31-2010

yup. true love is never easy cos it gonna takes two to complete.

angel33614

07/31/2010

Thank you for the read and review my new friend, it is always welcomed and greatly appreciated! Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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