Journey Of Life

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Picking up the pieces of a broken heart can be a challenge, even more of a challenge is learning to put them back together...

Journey Of Life

Deep into the creators of the universe,
Lies the eternal weeping heart,
Sobbing in its subtle tears,
Drying in a blanket of infinite stars.

The heart lies beneath the hidden gaps of the soul,
Lost in the forever growing boldness of the past.
Suddenly a glimmer of light is shown,
And a path is to be seen in the distance,
But the heart does not move,
Nor does it budge,
It is paralyzed with pain.

Time elapses,
And the universe unfolds into its awe,
And so the heart shimmers,
And with hesitance moves slowly on.

Plummeting in its path of gravity,
It now realizes with agonish fear,
That love dies hard.

With new fresh vibrant life ahead,
The heart embarks on yet another fearless adventure,
And so the frail frightened heart,
Opens into yet another enthusiastic bloom of life,
And in God hope resumes to find true love in one…

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A path can be foreseen in faith,
So never give up in God!!!

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LenaM commented on Journey Of Life

01-08-2011

I loved this write my poet friend this line reminds me that no matter how hard I try to resist the pull of love it's futile and the only escape is in loving again Plummeting in its path of gravity, It now realizes with agonish fear, That love dies hard.

carynontherhine commented on Journey Of Life

08-13-2010

Reading through your poems and I do so like this one. I think in the end it is almost like the busy bee. that there will be another love to never give up. Great write. Mypoet, my son

carynontherhine commented on Journey Of Life

07-15-2010

This one reminds me of a lost love and maybe embarking on a new journey to find true love once more. Hey, can't hide away in tears forever. And there was another bloom to come your way! I love this one! Caryn on the Rhine

jyothi commented on Journey Of Life

05-12-2010

Words crafted in emotion and --------------------------------inspiring poem.

SavVySam commented on Journey Of Life

05-12-2010

A beautiful and inspired message wrapped within this poetic gem! This one just sparkles!;)

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

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