you should be staring at the moon

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    you should be staring at the moon

     I visualize through my closed eyelids

    your legs entangled in mine

    fingers entwined

    I feel your breathing on my neck

    before you have seen my fear

    you should be staring at the moon

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    chopkins123 commented on you should be staring at the moon

    09-25-2010

    THE ENDING IS SWEET AND SURPRISING LEAVING THE READER TO THINK.
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