A Tribute to my Mom

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    • karix13
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    The lyrics to a song I wrote for my mom last christmas. I hope this speaks for children everywhere.

    A Tribute to my Mom

     Mom I love you because you understand,
    When I'm caught in the whirlwind, you hold onto my hand,
    And I can't count the tight spots you've gotten me through,
    You've always said you loved me and Mom,
    I love you too.

    Although my every emotion becomes confusing,
    Despite all my rejections, it's your advice I'm using,
    And you know I want to grow up and be just like you,
    You've always said you loved me, and mom,
    I love you too.

    Twelve years of teaching have driven me insane,
    But they've also saved me, guess who gets the blame,
    And no matter what I say when this song is through...
    You've always said you loved me, and Mom



    I love you too. 

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    seedsofgrowth commented on A Tribute to my Mom

    02-15-2019

    Hello again Karix13, I believe you have a knack for writing and a poetic garden with many seedlings germinating toward their potential growth! .I wish I could hear these lyric's sung! My beloved husband also wrote music and song lyric's! lol pam
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    Forestbird commented on A Tribute to my Mom

    12-22-2010

    Very good poem. You have a talant to say great things in very simple words
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    karix13

    12/22/2010

    Thanks! My mom certainly seemed to enjoy it.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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