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I've been so stressed lately, and this is how I feel right now. So hurt that the pain has dulled. Writing this poem helped though :)

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You've shook me up and down
Round and round
Never ending
No point
Can't see a light
Hurts in and out
I can't tell if it's still going
Oblivious
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So many wasted tears
I can't cry any longer
Dry
Unfeeling
Trapped
Hidden
No one can know
My never ending roller coaster
Just goes up and down
Up and down
I wish I could tell which was which 

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A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

karix13’s Poems (22)

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Ukulele wanderers 0
Nothing's Wrong 1
Whitened World 3
A Tribute to my Mom 2
Musician's Life 0
Numb 0
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My turn 0
Art 0
Silly little girl 0
defying gravity, poem 1 1
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Before you hurt someone 0
Sleepy cat 0
Bell the cat ( a limerick) 0
meeting of the felines 0
Things lost 0
Unfair 2