Unfair

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Unfair

One day I found a competition
In which you could enter a poem 
My friend and I had wrote one
So we read the rules to know 'em
Thankfully the rules were quite clear
We thought it would be so much fun
But we saw a rule that changed that
" only poems written by one"
It was such an amazing poem
It didn't seem quite fair
That there was this one shared poem
That no one else could share

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redbloodink commented on Unfair

01-24-2010

not here..... Multiple artistry is welcomed here..... With open arms to inspire talent and each-other we should be able to write poems songs and anything else together.... ty for sharing and please bring the work here would love to read.... I have writen a few poems with others I have met in my life what a blessing to share raw talent.... red

karix13

01/24/2010

Read the grandfather clock poem written with miss thompson. thats the poem I wrote about.

karix13 commented on Unfair

01-24-2010

True story

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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