Death

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    This is a poem I wrote a few days after my daughter died in my arm I miss her so much.

    Death

    Death has come and you have gone
    Now sorrow has settled in
    And I am left to carry on 
    But were do I begin


    To lose a child no words can express
    My hopeless days of loneliness
    I remember you as a little child
    You had the sweetest smiles


    And year by year I would watch you grow.
    In to the woman I have come to know.
    You were taken before your time.
    It was Gods but it wasn't mine.


    In the end Gods will was done .
    You have gone to be with your baby son .
    The two little ones you have left behind.
    In there eyes your light still shines.

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    TuggleBear commented on Death

    09-27-2009

    Great Job! I know this was a time of loss, but just remember, in God's time, you will be able to spend eternity with her. When I'm in your position, I just try to remember, that it's like I can't see my family for a few years, but I'll be able to spend millions with them, in Heaven, the most amazing place. So, I wish you well, and God Bless!

    honeypot

    09/27/2009

    Thanks for the kind comments and wise advice friend . and God Bless

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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