Death

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    This is a poem I wrote a few days after my daughter died in my arm I miss her so much.

    Death

    Death has come and you have gone
    Now sorrow has settled in
    And I am left to carry on 
    But were do I begin


    To lose a child no words can express
    My hopeless days of loneliness
    I remember you as a little child
    You had the sweetest smiles


    And year by year I would watch you grow.
    In to the woman I have come to know.
    You were taken before your time.
    It was Gods but it wasn't mine.


    In the end Gods will was done .
    You have gone to be with your baby son .
    The two little ones you have left behind.
    In there eyes your light still shines.

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    TuggleBear commented on Death

    09-27-2009

    Great Job! I know this was a time of loss, but just remember, in God's time, you will be able to spend eternity with her. When I'm in your position, I just try to remember, that it's like I can't see my family for a few years, but I'll be able to spend millions with them, in Heaven, the most amazing place. So, I wish you well, and God Bless!

    honeypot

    09/27/2009

    Thanks for the kind comments and wise advice friend . and God Bless

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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