I Don't Want You

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    Inspired by I Don't Want You by Blonde Redhead

    I Don't Want You

    Step

    beat

    into me

     

    solid lashes

    and tam tams

    beep beep beep

     

    strum me

    stroke me

    vibrant screams

     

    they don't want you

    don't need you

     

    just feel

     

    feel comfort

     

    hasten to make the day

    into a spiral

    a beep beep beep

     

    high and low

    strum and stroke

    continuous

     

    they don't want you

    don't need you

     

    bump bump

     

    don't wanna know

    who you feel

     

    not a singe of inferiority

     

    I feel

    I dreamed

    absentminded

     

    you tried

    remained

    lost

     

    they feel

    well all is over for you

     

    as you don't belong

    as I've been

    being

     

    but they don't want you

    don't need you

     

    how do you feel?

    I wanna know

     

    weak confrontation

    is useless

    useless when speaking to

    a broken mirror

    nothing

    myself

    nothing

    begin again.

     

    11-23-2010

     

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