I will Visit You Tonight.

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    I will Visit You Tonight.


    I will visit you tonight.

    I open my lattice window to let in the dampened moonlight.

    Beneath me , all is quiet and dark green .

    I look up and push hard the wind beneath my wings .

    The hole in the clouds is my doorway.

    Now, with the moon on my back, I see my silhouette ,
    gliding across the white sea of midnight clouds.

    With out a thought, with only one thought,
    My senses guide me to you.

    The small of your neck beckons me.

    The smell of your hair , the soft pale curve of your breast.

    Dare not open your eyes.

    Let just me , gaze upon you.

    I breath you in, deeply.

    Place my lips just so,
    My heart pounds now.
    It's time,
    I go.

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    charmlessman2d commented on I will Visit You Tonight.

    08-03-2011

    lovely choice of vocabulary brother. I felt the passion and yearning to visit this particular girl. The nighttime bug i call it. Great work man. excited to read more from you. clever lyricist.
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    freezspirit commented on I will Visit You Tonight.

    12-31-2010

    This poem is quite lovely! I knew a captain once, this brought me to a special place from days gone by, thank you for posting this one,,it is very special to me. freezspirit, Blessings
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    kdarcy commented on I will Visit You Tonight.

    08-01-2010

    Nice write with some great images, thought it a bit short when it ended, lol
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    captaininsight

    08/29/2010

    Thank you , I apologize for taking so long to get back to you.

    iLuvPoetryJACOB commented on I will Visit You Tonight.

    06-20-2010

    I just love the imagery in this piece. I kept wanting more as the words unfolded. Another great write. --Natalie.
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    captaininsight

    08/29/2010

    Thank you , I apologize for taking so long to get back to you.

    Juliez commented on I will Visit You Tonight.

    05-04-2010

    I think you've visited with me a time or two! (LOL) ...didn't have to open my eyes to know it was you! What a great poem!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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