Lillie's Blue

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    To my wife on her birthday and our anniversary.

    Lillie's Blue

    This is to my beautiful wife,

    on her Birthday and,

    our third year of life.

    So rare it is to find True Love,

    this gift, a blessing from above.

    Our fortune's come to make us strong,

    as heart to heart we move along,

    this path adorned with Lillie's Blue,

    as hand in hand I walk with you.

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    Stryx commented on Lillie's Blue

    11-29-2009

    Yes, I know the feelings well. My bride could not stay too long. It was the big A and she died on my birthday.

    captaininsight

    11/29/2009

    I share your pain, may she find peace and may you find strength. Here's something I wrote a while ago. It Echoes that momenthttp://www.originalpoetry.com/leave-me-alone

    captaininsight

    11/29/2009

    Thank You for your read.

    Artie commented on Lillie's Blue

    11-29-2009

    This is so smooth, and so full of emotion, that when reading it, I felt the strength of your passion. 10 from me

    captaininsight

    11/29/2009

    Thanks Artie, thanks.

    cmlestrade commented on Lillie's Blue

    10-19-2009

    This is so beautiful and romantic. i know she just loved this poem. Lucky Lillie.

    captaininsight

    10/22/2009

    Thanks Ms. Cmlestrade, I've been so busy , I need to make time to read and write . It's selfish of me , I apologise.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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