SPEW

These poems that you write,
so banal and contrite,
so obscure, and deranged,
nothing has changed .

It comes and it goes ,
the rhyme, and the prose,
the levels, the lyes,
the why not's, and the why's.

It spews from your face,
it's sooo commonplace,
the dribble, the drool,
from a poet,
 a fool.

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simoneaugustus commented on SPEW

04-27-2010

Ha ha ha! I must keep this handy when my writer's block tries to force me into writing that's not fit to potty train my puppy with! Of course, I'm reading into it as being somewhat facetious, but even if I missed the true intent, this was a fantastic read!!!

captaininsight

04/27/2010

you haven't missed a thing Simone.Thank You

SavVySam commented on SPEW

09-27-2009

Wicked whit, I love it!!! I've been guilty of this a time or three myself! LOL What a clever cleaver you wield!

captaininsight

09/28/2009

Thank You for reading me.

cmlestrade commented on SPEW

09-23-2009

Perfect. great rhyme and rhythm. Some people can just do poetic enticement with any topic. This is a perfect example. It just makes you want to read more by that poet.

Tempy commented on SPEW

07-26-2009

is it really your place to say? i feel that from having such harsh words that not everyonwe will ever agree this saddens me

captaininsight

07/27/2009

Tempy, .."ever agree" on what? , and more importantly , why must everyone agree? My dear all poetry is not created to make YOU happy, . I can reccomend Dr. Seuss for you however. That's pretty happy stuff but don't read about the Grinch 'cause he's bad. Try to be less opinionated and more critical in your comments so people can understand your reason(if any) more than just how it made you feel.Thanks for the read though.Can't wait to read you.

Charlie23 commented on SPEW

07-20-2009

I enjoy your writings captaininsight! I would have to agree with connsk8 on the image though, a bit graphic.

captaininsight

07/20/2009

Thank You again Charlie23. These are just words, that's just an image.Send me any suggestions that you may find. Read you soon. Captaininsight.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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