My Eyes Have Seen Now.

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My Eyes Have Seen Now.

My eyes have seen now
more than half,
of a hundred years.
Opened wide
and closed tight shut,
smiled and shed some tears.
Gazed upon the heavens
and deep beneath the sea,
from up on high,
through forest green.,
Now let me tell you
what I’ve seen..

All types I’ve seen
of man and beast,
at this Gods table
come to feast
upon what life has given us,
some love and hate
some fear and trust.

Attend this life
with kindness well.
This I’ve seen
and can now tell.

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simoneaugustus commented on My Eyes Have Seen Now.

04-27-2010

Charming and affecting, you have such a mesmerizing way with words.

SavVySam commented on My Eyes Have Seen Now.

09-25-2009

I am so glad I checked back to find this gem of a poem I missed before. I loved it, and wanted to go on reading! Very nicely done.

captaininsight

09/28/2009

Again , Thank You, I look forward to reading you.

swashington commented on My Eyes Have Seen Now.

09-14-2009

Thank you again your travels have given you so much of life to share.

cmlestrade commented on My Eyes Have Seen Now.

09-05-2009

Wow. This was a terrific poem. It's so true when you're young you think you know it all, a little bit older you feel you can solve it all,older still it seems like you've seen and done it all but know that you haven't. this was wonderful to read a ten in my book.

captaininsight

09/05/2009

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wheelsal commented on My Eyes Have Seen Now.

07-20-2009

At half a hundred you have seen a lot and this tells it. On to the next fifty. Sally

captaininsight

07/20/2009

I won't see that unfortunately Sally..."Broken Bird" Thank you for reading me, I'll read you later, Captaininsight.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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