Ode to Tenderpoison

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Ode to Tenderpoison

My blood runs hot, my pulse now quickened,
 no offence intended, 
all lovers mine and yet to meet,
 will never quite be mended.
For now I've read you,
I know you're there,
 of beauty which I was unaware,
 and though I only speak your name,
 love will never be the same.

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Artie commented on Ode to Tenderpoison

11-29-2009

It seems we share a common interest- she is one of my favorites as well 10

captaininsight

11/29/2009

Quite exceptional indeed. Guess we should start a fan club! Again thank you for your read.

cmlestrade commented on Ode to Tenderpoison

09-23-2009

Loving the work of tenderpoison I truly loved this. For me she is a poet who will really reveals herself down to the depths and when she rights of pain and betrayal i actually feel it myself.

captaininsight

09/28/2009

Yes she is indeed, phenomimal writing

tenderpoison commented on Ode to Tenderpoison

07-20-2009

I appreciate the revised first line :)....and am honored by your tribute...friends in poetryland....indeed capitan

captaininsight

07/21/2009

write , write and re-write , that's what they say. Thanks for excusing my indiscretion

connsk8 commented on Ode to Tenderpoison

07-18-2009

I think she is most deserving of this and those of us who love her through the beauty of her poetry and her person like to refer to her as "Tender",,,I hope she has been informed of this most beautiful ode to herself...

captaininsight

07/20/2009

Thank you connsk8. I hope Tender likes it too,don't know if she's read it though.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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