I wish For Death

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    I wish For Death

     I hear the screams in my head
    I feel the flesh run cold
    I see my daughter lie there dead
    The horror that blackens my soul
    I know no greater pain
    Than to see her life solwly drain
    I can not cry I can not think
    I feel the sorrow and pain grow
    I feel it take control
    Theres no stopping the tears in my eyes
    I want to hold her again is what I cry
    For this among other reasons makes me wish to die

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    sk8erpoet commented on I wish For Death

    08-30-2010

    i love it.....so deep and emotional but really good.....lots of pain is expressed but in a nice way.....great write...sk8
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    jj1562 commented on I wish For Death

    06-01-2010

    defanatly from the heart and very deep. I give it a hiagh nine good write
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    SuperChick76 commented on I wish For Death

    06-01-2010

    A very deep and heartfelt poem. Such a painful expression of a loss that should never be able to be comprehended, but alas is all too often. Beautifully expressed, my friend.
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    Solaris

    07/16/2010

    I wrote it because it happened to me and i had to express my pain

    HopeOhlarik commented on I wish For Death

    04-08-2010

    I don't know the pain of loosing a daughter, or anything close. Poem is good, needs puncuation. "I can not cry I can not think" things like this need a comma, it helps to prove the feeling more. You pause at commas so a comma after cry, makes you pause and lets the feelings sink in more. Pain like that I am more than sure hurts, I haven't seen any of my own children die. Yet I have seen countless deaths replayed in front of me. All I can stay is take a breath and remember, she's in a better place and she's not in this hell of a world. If you ever wanna talk, hit me up. I hear I'm an exceptional listener =)
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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